Feed Back of Final Production

• How effectively edited is the thriller?

• Great use of filters which are placed perfectly within each change of shot. Reuse of the shoe shot creates a relapse effect that increases tension.

• Thought that the repetition got a bit boring after a while but showed a lot of mystery. All in all great work.

• Discuss the use of sound in this thriller, both diegetic and non-diegetic. What emotions does it invoke and how effective is it?

• Crackling of leaves is effective use of diegetic sound.
• Speech; screaming adds reality to the & suspense make you wonder whats going on.
• Music; fits well - right pace of music for the visuals. Not too fast/not too dull. Strings often used in thrillers, which fits with conventions.
  

• What words would you use to describe the visual style?

• Always a point of view shot. Invokes a sense of confusion. Put in position of victim or murderer.

• Highlight at least three things that you think are good about this thriller and two areas for development or suggestions of how things could have been done differently

• The heart beat in the music is good.
• The music itself is also good.
• The shaky camera, works to a good effect.
• The titles could have been a bit more subtle and they lasted a bit too long too.
• It was a little too much of the same type of shot, not enough variation of angles - also plot was a little confusing.