7 The Review 8

Rough Cut and feedback




Editing:

• Beginning sequence goes on for too long and we began to get bored. Liked the camera views increasing tension where he was watching them.

Camera-work:

• Camera-work is good - clearly supposed to be shaky but would be more effective if had some steady camera work in contrast.

Sound:

• Silence & high pitch at the beginning is really effective, footsteps are also good and so is the breathing.

Mise en scene:

• First shot had a good misé en scene. Second; the lighting didn't work, didn't look very thrilleresque. The lighting of several shots were not very good.

• Foot shots with leaves were good = more dead leaves would have been more effective.

• Cars in background weren't very good. Looked a bit out of place. Costume of "Killer" not the most effective.

• Good headlessness!